Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mr Bell. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, April 17, 2020
stuff about hurricans
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
hi Will, I'm pleased to see you are blogging at home. Remember to add a full description of your work and use punctuation correctly. Did you just answer the 'Evaluate It' questions or have you completed another part of this reading task too? I look forward to seeing more!
ReplyDeleteHi Will
ReplyDeleteThis looks interesting! I look forward to reading more when you have finished. Mrs Pascoe